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mmerriam ([personal profile] mmerriam) wrote2007-07-20 12:49 pm
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Phase One Complete

The initial scene breakdown is over. I have looked at each scene and made notes about who is in it, who has POV, why the scene is happening, and what it does.

I can already see several things that need to be repaired, explained, combined, or cut. Ah, the advantage of having ignored it for four months.

Now comes the hard part. Doing a quick reread and then combing through the crits and suggestions.

[identity profile] j-cheney.livejournal.com 2007-07-20 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I let mine lie about for about 6 months...I hate to chop that sub-plot, but with some distance I can see that surgery needs to be done!